Bittersweet: A Story of Dominance and Submission

Professional Reviews

4 CHERRIES: "'It isn’t like you would even see anyone you knew. The place is on a freakin’ island.' Famous last words! Piper Crane has a decision to make. Does she continue to live her boring structured life or does she give in to what she really wants and become a submissive for two weeks to a complete stranger? It wouldn’t be much of a story if she stayed on the straight and narrow. So, of course, she takes a chance and joins her friend for two weeks at the Bre’zail Resort, where kink is always on the menu! If it wasn’t intimidating enough to be served up to one male dominant, Piper soon realizes that she is to be the sex slave to the four men whom already dominate her thoughts and now will have complete control of her body as well. One of the things I really appreciated about Bittersweet was how Ms. Snow wrote Piper’s reaction to first seeing the Grayson brothers on the island. At one point Piper thinks to herself that if she hadn’t been wearing a mask she was sure she would have that “deer in the headlights” look on her face. The mask seems to serve a dual purpose of providing anonymity as well as a boost of courage for Piper. Ms. Snow’s writing is very vivid and I could almost feel Piper’s apprehension as well as her anticipation. There were multiple times while they were on the island that I wanted one of the men to jerk her mask off and reveal her identity but that would have messed up the dramatic ending to the story. Want to know what happens? Read the book!! This little novella moves pretty fast from start to finish. I couldn’t put it down and was eager to get to the HEA. The title may be Bittersweet but the ending is anything but bitter and a whole lot of sweet!!" -- Honeysuckle, Whipped Cream Reviews

4 CUPS: "Piper is an every day woman working to survive. She doesn't usually do anything out of the ordinary, but agrees to go to a sex resort with her best friend for two weeks. Upon arriving, her best friend deserts her, so she decides to make the most of her vacation. She's always had a secret fetish for being someone's submissive, so she signs up a fantasy. When four men pick her for their sub, she's shocked that they're actually her four gorgeous employers. Luckily she wears a mask (and little else) during their sex games because she fears losing her job if they find out she's really their secretary. This story was all about the sex, and there is a LOT of it. Jenika Snow is a talented author, and I look forward to reading more of her work. If you're looking for a titillating tale with some D/s in the mix, this is a great short read." -- LynnMarie, Happily Ever After Reviews
 

Excerpt

ADULT EXCERPT

She got on her knees between his legs because she knew what he wanted. She knew this even before he started unzipping his pants and pulling out his cock. Her eyes widened slightly, and she swallowed involuntarily. Ian’s cock was thick and long. The head was flared and a darker shade than the rest of his shaft. The slit already seeped pre-cum and she looked up at him. She lowered her head, all the while keeping her stare on his, until she felt the hot, silky tip of his erection brush against her mouth.

The wood of the floor was hard against her knees, but the slight pain did nothing to mask the fire simmering within her. She was keenly aware of the men behind her, could practically feel their eyes on her spread ass and the plug nestled between them. She tried not to become self-conscious as she closed her eyes and sucked Ian’s cock head in her mouth. He tasted salty and all male as she moved her tongue around the slit, bathing her senses in the masculine aroma and flavor which was all him.

She ran her tongue along the flared head, feeling the ridge making up the crown, and then sucked in more of his shaft. She wasn’t an expert in sucking cock, but she found pleasure that he kept shifting in his seat. She brought her hand up and gripped the root of his penis, the hardness and silkiness a vast contrast. Her fingers didn’t touch as she gripped him, his thickness impressive yet startling. She sucked harder, trying to bring more of his flesh into her mouth but only able to engulf half. She used her hand to massage what she couldn’t reach, stroking him up and down, as her mouth did the rest.

She could hear his breathing increase, and she opened her eyes to look at his face. He was staring down at her, his jaw tense, his teeth grinding harshly, so the sound of teeth on teeth was loud in the room. She moaned around his flesh, working her mouth faster as she moved her head up and down. She knew he was getting close because his hips starting rising to meet her motions. He made a deep and guttural sound in the back of his throat, and she felt the first pulse of his orgasm fill her mouth.

Her clit throbbed with the need for release, and she ached to be touched, to be stroked. Jet after jet of his cum filled her mouth, and she greedily swallowed him. It was thick and salty, but purely male and all him. When his cock became flaccid, she let it slip out. She leaned back on her heels, breathing deeply, and she was acutely aware of the shift of air brushing along her engorged nipples when Ian stood. He stared at her as he tucked himself back in and stepped away.

She didn’t move, remembering he said she was to pleasure all four of them. Logan sat where Ian had, and she was aware of the door opening and closing. She didn’t bother looking back because she knew Ian had left, knew he had what he wanted and he needed nothing more, at least not right now. She shivered at her thoughts and at the sensual look Logan cast her way. He didn’t remove his erection straining against his trousers, and it took her a moment to realize he wanted her to do it.

She swallowed, still tasting Ian’s spunk coating her mouth as she moved toward Logan, unbuttoned and unzipped his pants, and pulled his shaft free. He was about the same girth and length as Ian, thick and straining right toward her like it knew what she was about to do. The light caught the pearl of clear fluid dotting the lip, and she ran her tongue over it, darting her eyes toward his face and loving when he moaned softly.

Her body was beyond aroused. The juices freely seeped out of her vagina, and she knew the remaining men behind her had a clear shot of the glistening substance. She moaned against Logan’s flesh, feeling his body tense as she sucked more of him inside. The more she lapped at his erection, the hotter she became. She gripped the heavy weight below his penis and massaged his balls as she hollowed out her cheeks. The heavy panting of Logan’s breathing had her on the verge of climaxing. But without something to physically stimulate her, she would forever be on the verge.

The first shot of his cum in her mouth had her moaning wildly, sucking harder and massaging the heavy weight of his testicles faster. The second jet was more powerful, slamming into the back of her throat and sliding down. When the last spurt erupted from him and his dick became limp, he gently shifted her away and tucked himself back in his pants. His fingers grabbed a piece of her hair and rubbed it between his fingers. That simple touch shot right to her clit, making it more swollen until it throbbed between her pussy lips.

She panted, as she stayed on her knees. She heard the door open and close once more and swallowed, still tasting Logan’s semen coat her taste buds. Two down, two to go. She looked over her shoulder, her eyes slightly widening, when Jake and Brendin started to unbutton their slacks in unison.