Reviews for Gavin's Bliss (MFM)

I agree with the other reviewer that the endearment "Baby" was overused to the EXTREME. Unlike that reviewer though, I did finish reading the book. The story was very, very simplistic and unrealistic. Gavin helped jump her car and just decided to bring her home. He's a cop, but Shelby expressed little to NO reservations about the whole scenario! Less than 24 hrs later the two were having sex. It was just...weird. Right after that, Shelby had a huge family emergency. Despite barely knowing each other he dropped everything to help her with. Something HUGE happened in the heroine's life NOTHING really came of it. This big emergence, there was NO follow up afterward. I had no idea why the author even included this plot point. After that,, the trio decided to have a ménage and literally that same day, Gavin & Mike were already thinking about making it permanent. The whole story was like paint by numbers. Very superficial. Little to no deep emotion, particularly from the heroine whose life was changing at light speed but she never acknowledged it. Not only was the story not well thought out and plotted, but it was boring. The sex scenes were clinical. Overall, this was just a weak book with bad editing.

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Sorry Ms Nickol I did not bother to finish reading this book. The over use of the endearment 'baby' got to be too much. I don't mind the use of endearments such as honey, sugar, sweetie but to use the same one over and over and over again was too much.

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