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Reviews by Bashan

9 Ratings
Avg - 3.67
Master Eric's Virgin Sub (MF) by Clair de Lune (Published by: Siren-BookStrand, Inc. )
$4.5
Categories: BDSM, Contemporary

This reviewer's rating: 1 - Poor

Based on the first book in the series I purchased this book. However, while the first book was a good start and showed promise of a great author this book did not live up to expectations. There is a huge continuity issue regarding timing of several days being suddenly turned to one day and regarding the location of house to apartment. Did this book never get read by an editor? But an even bigger issue is the manner of writing is incredibly stilted, as though it was still in outline form and never was fleshed out with dialogue and details. Seems this book might have been pushed out too fast, much to the detriment of the author's reputation and the reader's enjoyment. This is one book for which I wish I could have a refund. I tried to finish it but couldn't get past two thirds of the way through.

Reviewed by: Bashan (Date: 11/01/2012)
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