Reviews for Collared: Ashton (MMF)

Loved this book...so full of heart and emotion,

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I want to read more from this author please:)

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BDSM club owners and Former Force Recon Ty Hollis and Nate Marquez have decided after six years together that they're in need of a third in the relationship. Not attracted to other men, they know for them the only option would be a female. I was excited about reading this story as it’s a new writer and the blurb caught my interest. This is a very short story (43K works) and unfortunately for me it felt short. Ty and Nate meet Ashton after she comes to their home looking for her friend and roommate, Sophie. Sophie it turns out is a submissive that Ty and Nate trained at their club. Not understanding or knowing about the lifestyle, Ashton is very distrustful of the two Doms. I was confused as to why Ashton didn’t know more about the lifestyle considering that she and Sophie were supposed to be very close. I was hoping that could have been used as a great way to tell me how the Doms will train her. Instead what I got was that she was trained – oh no no no, I wanna read it don’t just tell me it happened. I didn’t really see how after the second day together the trio began professing their love for one another. Don’t get me wrong folks, I think that falling in love quickly is not only possible but also plausible when it’s conveyed to reader well; but I just didn’t believe it for these three. Like I said before, I don’t want to be told it’s already happened I really wanna read how it happens (that’s what I paid for). I can’t say that I ever really care for these three; I thought that I could but I just didn’t know enough of the whys and could neither relate nor understand them at all. Even though Ty and Nate profess to love Ashton, I don’t know what they loved about her and I don’t know what she loved about them. Most disappointing were the sex scenes between the trio, there was more focus on the intimacy between the Nate and Ty than between Nate, Ty and Ashton. I’m still trying to figure out why this story feels like I’m missing another story line between Mike, Keith and Sophie, I looked and couldn’t find one. Maybe I’ll have better luck on the next one by this author. Happy Reading Folks!

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I loved everything about this book! Excellent story and sexy too. I couldnt put this one down. I felt so much of what the characters felt as if I was there with them, that truly makes an amazing writer. Ms Wray sure knows how to tell a great story. I was so sad when the end came, because I didnt want to let Ashton,Ty and Nate go, these three characters grew on me and I wanted to read more about them. lol I so look forward to reading more in another of her Collared Lovers series. BRAVO! A Fantastic Book!!

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