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Reviews for Master Eric's Virgin Sub (MF)

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9 Ratings
Avg - 3.67
Master Eric's Virgin Sub (MF) by Clair de Lune (Published by: Siren-BookStrand, Inc. )
$4.5
Categories: BDSM, Contemporary

This reviewer's rating: 5 - Outstanding

Fantastic and so HOT

Reviewed by: Barefoot Okie (Date: 11/07/2012)
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9 Ratings
Avg - 3.67
Master Eric's Virgin Sub (MF) by Clair de Lune (Published by: Siren-BookStrand, Inc. )
$4.5
Categories: BDSM, Contemporary

This reviewer's rating: 1 - Poor

Based on the first book in the series I purchased this book. However, while the first book was a good start and showed promise of a great author this book did not live up to expectations. There is a huge continuity issue regarding timing of several days being suddenly turned to one day and regarding the location of house to apartment. Did this book never get read by an editor? But an even bigger issue is the manner of writing is incredibly stilted, as though it was still in outline form and never was fleshed out with dialogue and details. Seems this book might have been pushed out too fast, much to the detriment of the author's reputation and the reader's enjoyment. This is one book for which I wish I could have a refund. I tried to finish it but couldn't get past two thirds of the way through.

Reviewed by: Bashan (Date: 11/01/2012)
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9 Ratings
Avg - 3.67
Master Eric's Virgin Sub (MF) by Clair de Lune (Published by: Siren-BookStrand, Inc. )
$4.5
Categories: BDSM, Contemporary

This reviewer's rating: 3 - Average

Wasn't as good as I was hoping. The beginning of the book rehashes what happened in the the first book of the series but from Eric's point of view. Not much new there - wasted a lot of time in my opinion. Some of the story could have used editing. She was living at Jane's then all of a sudden her apartment gets broken into and her laptop stolen, everyone turns on her and it all happens in one day when the story initially made it sound like it happened over several days. Very confusing. Then about 70% of the way through the book we are introduced to Fiona. She came out of left field, had never been mentioned before. Could have been handled better. Come to find out the next book is about Fiona and it just feels like she was dumped in this book to lead into the next book in the series.

Reviewed by: marnew (Date: 10/28/2012)
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9 Ratings
Avg - 3.67
Master Eric's Virgin Sub (MF) by Clair de Lune (Published by: Siren-BookStrand, Inc. )
$4.5
Categories: BDSM, Contemporary

This reviewer's rating: 5 - Outstanding

Very enjoyable reading and although I haven't yet read the first story in this series I was able to get enough from this story to fill in any gaps. The sex between these two is great and the way he protects and defends her when everyone else is ready to persecute poor emma unjustly is great. I look forward to more books from this fairly new aurthor.

Reviewed by: sarki (Date: 10/24/2012)
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