Grace's Final Submission (MFM)
Locks and Chains

Professional Reviews

4 STARS: "Grace's Final Submission is a beautiful story of a woman accepting her true nature, overcoming inhibitions and learning to rely on others. The story is written in a thoughtful, introspective manner that connects readers to Grace Sinclair, a new divorcee, who is exploring her interest in BDSM. Submissive at heart, she is often mistaken as a Domme because of her confident air and inherent strength. Just days after Grace joins a BDSM club, she chooses to be auctioned off as a slave and enter into submissive training. A highly likeable character – not stereotypically weak or vulnerable - her strength in the face of such a lifestyle change is remarkable. Readers have to respect a woman who researches the lifestyle to fully understand the commitment she is making. The moments of inner dialogue provide readers an intimate view of Grace as she takes her journey. Bought by Michael Cooper and Jason Smith, life-long friends and business partners who both exude erotic sensuality and an overactive sex drive, Grace finds herself happy. They give her exactly what she needs while she saves them in their search for the perfect submissive. Together they discover just how perfect they are for one another. The elements of the story – particularly in regards to their BDSM lifestyle – are woven into the story in a necessary way so that each scene is essential to the story building. With both humor and sensuality, readers become invested in Grace's relationship with Michael and Jason. As their positions change and they become more in tuned with one another – in the household, office and bedroom, all seems well. Suddenly Grace can see herself with these men permanently, imagining children and marriage. With their contract nearing the end, Michael and Jason want to ask Grace to become their wife… until tragedy hits and the tension in the story ratchets up ten-fold. Readers won't be able to help themselves from becoming frustrated with the men as they botch things up. But the method they employ to make amends is an amazing testament to their love for Grace. The story is a beautiful one that any fan of romance, but particularly those who enjoy BDSM, will enjoy. As is, this author has caught my attention and I'll be looking forward to her next book." -- Rebecca, The Romance Reviews

Excerpt

ADULT EXCERPT

Jason rose from his chair and circled the beautiful, panting slave at his feet. He dropped behind the kneeling woman and gently pushed her forward until she was on all fours. Kneeling behind her, he positioned his cock between her pussy lips and thrust hard.

She moaned at finally being filled with human flesh. The friction against her innermost walls and the feel of warm, soft skin made her purr in pleasure as he pumped and thrust hard and fast. “Nice, tight pussy here, slave. You were built for us. Just for us.” Jason rolled his hips a little, and Grace felt the thrill of his cock dragging against her G-spot.

Michael stood in front of her, his eyes fixed on Jason and what he was doing to Grace’s sopping pussy. He held his cock in his closed fist, gently stroking back and forward, pumping and massaging. “Suck on my cock, slave.” He then knelt in front of Grace’s face, and she opened her mouth, swallowing down on his cock. Rubbing her tongue with a fervor against the underside of his cock, savoring the feel of it in her mouth, she had never experienced such a single, focused need in her life. The only function her brain could provide was the knowledge that only these men and their cocks could bring her to the nirvana she craved, wanted, needed.

“Jason, let’s take her together.” Both men pulled out of her body, and she instantly felt empty. She whimpered in distress as Jason lay down on the floor.

“Okay, slave, mount me.” Grace immediately crawled on top of Jason and straddled his hips. With one hand holding his cock, she lowered herself onto his pulsing erection. She then began the long, hard ride to heaven.

She felt herself being pushed from behind until she fell on Jason’s chest. Confused, she tried to focus on Jason’s face. She needed to search his eyes for answers. Before she could focus, she felt Michael’s body against her back and a pressure on her anus. He inserted one finger, then two fingers, scissoring them inside her, stretching her. When he was satisfied, he removed his fingers, positioning his cock at her anus, and slowly pushed through her rings of muscles.

Grace felt burning fullness, but the erotic thoughts of being double penetrated overrode any feelings of pain. Once his cock was fully seated, she heard the male groans all around her. “Baby, your ass is so tight. It feels like it’s strangling my cock,” Michael ground out through clenched teeth.

Jason slowly slid his cock almost out of her tightly clenching pussy and then started a slow thrusting rhythm. Michael matched his rhythm in her ass and timed to enter just as Jason withdrew.

 Michael could feel the ridges and pulsing of Jason’s cock through the thin skin barrier separating Grace’s glorious caverns.

Grace was overwhelmed with sensation. “Please, Masters, fuck me. Fuck me hard and fast. Use your slave,” Grace screamed.

Their control snapped at her pleading, and they began thrusting with a relentless fervor. Minutes, seconds, hours, time lost all meaning for Grace as her body began to burn and throb. As one orgasm hit, her body flew straight toward another. Over and over they pounded her, forcing her to have orgasm after orgasm. The room echoed with screams and groans and a slave chanting, “Fuck me, please fuck me. Use me. I’m your slave.”

Michael pushed a small vibrator between Jason and Grace, positioning it on her clit at the highest speed. Immediately, the most powerful orgasm overtook her, and she felt her muscles clamp hard on both the cocks inside her.