[#262 Siren Ménage Everlasting: Erotic Western Ménage a Trois Romance, M/F/M]

Leah Brooke writing as Lana Dare.
Desire, Oklahoma: The Founding Fathers...and the courageous women who dare to love them.

Here is how it all begins...
When Eb and Jeremiah Tyler left their father’s ranch five years ago, Maggie Simms thought she’d never see them again. But now they’re back. But different.

In the years they’ve been gone, they’ve become strangers—-hard, cold men she barely recognizes. Dangerous men. But her heart knows them. And knows she’d never survive watching them walk away again, even though they see her as nothing more than the woman they’d helped raise, one who understands ranch life.

Knowing she could never let them suspect that she loves them both, she dreams of marrying one of them and living happily ever after on their father’s ranch. But she’s stunned to learn they have plans of their own-—plans to share her. To take her away from the only home she’d ever known. To a ranch in Oklahoma, called the Circle T. In a town they call Desire.

Note: There is no sexual relationship or touching for titillation between or among siblings.

A Siren Erotic Romance

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Untamed Desire (MFM)
286 Ratings (4.5)
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Cover Art by Les Byerley
I spent a few days trying to write this review and when I gave up for the night last night and try to get some sleep everything I wanted to say or can think of to say just starts popping into my head. I would have crawled my sorry butt back out of bed to write it all out but my husband is awake before the butt crack of dawn to go to work, so I had to wait to wake up and get my chores done before I could start writing this review so here we are on Untamed Desire.

I started with the Desire, Oklahoma series (written under the name Leah Brooke) and then I discover The Founding Fathers (written under name Lana Dare) and well I just had to dive in to the beginning so I could get back to the modern-day version. After all one should always start at the beginning which brings me to Untamed Desire the first in the Desire, Oklahoma: The Founding Fathers. An extremely steamy, erotic story about Maggie and her men, Eb and Jeremiah that is so well written that I found only one small error which a simple period can fix. The steamy, erotic parts are numerous however they don’t over run the storyline to the point of drowning out the plot of the story which I think centers around Maggie, Eb and Jeremiah settling into married life with the addition of Maggie settling into a new location away from the home she has always know. There are few hair-raising moments to go along with the many steamy climatic moments but I think you will enjoy the moments that are definitely foreplay the most.

What I didn’t like about Untamed Desire was the egoistical male chauvinism however accurate it was for the time period. But I think the thing I disliked the most out of the alpha males in this story was how everything about Maggie, even her past was their business while their man whoring past was none of her business, I really hate double standards, it is huge pet peeve of mine but again it is probably a most accurate mentality of the men of that time frame.

This review posting contains the body of the review, which is only a portion of the original review which is posted here http://lauralusbookreviews.blogspot.com/2017/12/untamed-desire-desire-oklahoma-founding.html
Loved the book!
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5 TEA CUPS: "Untamed Desire by Lana Dare shows how a small town in Oklahoma was built on desire for a woman—two men loved her since their early ages. Maggie was around sixteen years of age and learned that the two men she loved were leaving her and did not understand why. To Maggie they had left her, never to return and they just got up and left her alone with her father. Eb and Jeremiah did not have a choice but to leave her. She was too young and they needed to start a new life without her but they never did stop loving her. They both knew that one day they would return and claim their woman and live happily ever after. After Maggie's father's death she realized that after five years Eb and Jeremiah were returning to Kansas City to help her with her dad's passing, not knowing what was coming. Lana Dare describes Maggie's fear of losing herself in her own sexual desires for the men she loves but also describes her so well that she does not want to be used only for sexual purposes. She wants Eb and Jeremiah to love her, make her feel wanted, hold her like a husband should. She has a hard time understanding why they treat her like a child and why they want to punish her like a child, but the hard thing is that she also desires it. Ed and Jeremiah have made themselves very wealthy men and have built a soon to be city and only want to share it with Maggie. Yet they have a lot to learn about Maggie. They have been gone for five years and she is no longer a little girl, she is now a woman. Lana Dare describes Eb and Jeremiah as two doms that believe that they have to enforce laws and punish Maggie for every bad action she makes. Ed and Jeremiah need to remember a woman is fragile and has insecurities, and needs to be handled as a precious thing and they need to learn how to hold her, love her, and tend to her as their wife—not as a prized possession only there for their sexual needs. All three have a lot to learn regarding their new life together and how they are going to make this work for them and how it will impact their new town that they have just named "Desire, Oklahoma." Read this great book and find out how Maggie, Eb and Jeremiah make a new life work for themselves and try to see if five years of them being apart will make a difference." -- Monica, Happily Ever After Reviews

4 1/2 DELIGHTFUL DIVAS: "I fell in love with Desire, Oklahoma, which is Leah Brooke’s very first book in that series. When I saw this series – Desire, Oklahoma: The Founding Fathers – I was immensely intrigued. I couldn’t wait to see how Desire, the town, got its start. Untamed Desire had much to live up to, but I can assure you that this story is well worth reading and certainly lives up to any pre-conceived notions that I had for this historical novel. Even if you haven’t read the Desire, Oklahoma series, feel free to start with this one. In fact, I think this book will have me re-reading the other series! Lana Dare’s characters come to life on the page. Maggie, the spitfire, and the Tyler men, those darling Alpha cowboys, absolutely make this story a non-stop read. I was hooked right away. In the present-day series, we have heard about a few of the founding characters and it is fantastic to get a chance to hear their stories. It’s like sitting down with an elder and hearing about times gone by – okay, a naughty elder granted, because we shouldn’t forget the outrageously hot sexual scenes that Ms. Dare has gifted us with throughout this story – but you get the idea. I think Ms. Dare has done an amazing job of weaving in the information from the current-day series so that it all comes together for us in Untamed Desire. I can’t wait for the next book in Desire Oklahoma: The Founding Fathers!" -- Jae, Dark Diva Reviews

"Readers familiar with Leah Brooke’s Desire, Oklahoma series are in for a real treat. This gifted Siren author does the time warp and morphs into historical mode under the pseudonym Lana Dare to recount the beginnings of Desire, Oklahoma. Ever wonder how Desire came to be the way it is? With men calling all the shots, protecting the women and forming ménages? Well, let’s just say my curiosity has been whetted. This series is just taking off and the new characters, Eb, Jeremiah, and Maggie lay the groundwork for more to come. The entire novel focuses on this trio and the many trials and triumphs they experience. Untamed Desire consists of three unique people building a different kind of marriage that doesn’t fit into societal norms. The elements of strong D/s interaction are present along with the romance and passionate feelings of intimacy and possessiveness. Eb and Jeremiah have an iron-clad sense of responsibility towards Maggie, which orchestrates the direction and tone of the story. The writing is lush in how it captures the sexuality and emotions of Maggie, the intensity of her physical and emotional reactions to the men, and vice versa. The most pervasively fascinating aspect of the story was in watching Maggie evolve from her innocent cocoon into a submissive who discovers her power as a woman and a sub, revels in it, and uses it to forge tighter bonds with her husbands. The author’s understanding in how these relationships work, is what makes the characters thrive successfully in the setting she’s created. It stamps the plot as believable, which makes it encompassing. Eb’s underlying darkness and Jeremiah’s suppressed insecurity offer you a glimpse into their souls, how the land has forged them into men who must bend the world around them to their will to survive the harsh brutality of storms, criminals, and disapproving townsfolk. They act as Maggie’s shield and tutor, while she makes it possible for them to love and retain their humanity. I see a lot of promise with this historical turn Leah Brooke/Lana Dare has chosen. There are secondary characters that will no doubt make an appearance in the next installment; lots of new people who I can see are part of the beginning of this town. It’s exciting to see what started it all, how the entire premise behind this place was brought into being. And you don’t need to read the previous books to understand the storyline either. This new direction is a winner! I’m very certain that it will gain new readers and delight current fans." -- Patrice, Joyfully Reviewed

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Bracing his weight on an elbow, he reached down to undo his pants, his eyes dark and wild as they narrowed on her face. “Damn, the list of things I want to do to you just keeps growing.” His gaze swept over her body as he positioned himself at her entrance. “Starting with fucking this tight pussy.”

Maggie reached for him, crying out when he thrust deep, the overwhelming sensation of being possessed never failing to startle her. She shoved his shirt from his shoulders, hungry to touch his bare skin.

His cock impaled her, the thick heat of it once again making her feel small and fragile against his strength. He slid a hand under her bottom, lifting her, and to her amazement, his cock slid even deeper inside her.

The difference in the way he took her now surprised her. She didn’t realize that sex could vary from one time to the next. It was as though he’d loosened the reins on his hunger, driving into her with a purpose and desperation that brought her own baser needs to the surface.

She responded to it in a way that shocked her, clawing at him as she fought to get even closer.

It seemed her body knew what to do even if she didn’t, knew what it wanted and made demands on Jeremiah, feminine, primitive demands that she didn’t fully understand.

She dug her nails into his shoulders as he thrust into her, wrapping her legs around him to lift herself into his strokes and crying out each time he dug at that magical place inside her.

He seemed to welcome those demands, meeting them with a forceful determination that left her breathless, her own hungers seeming to feed his.

His thighs shifted, pushing hers even wider as he began to thrust faster, his face buried against her neck. “Maggie! So fucking good. Take more, darlin’.” He nipped her earlobe, the slight sting like a jolt through her body, firing her need even more. She’d never realized sex could be so untamed and frenzied, the frantic turbulence just below the surface adding an animalistic element to it that alarmed her.

Overwhelmed by the riot of sensations and the strength of her own desires, she tucked her face beneath his jaw in a defensive effort to hide as much as she could from him, not daring to let him see her this way.

His knowledge of her body showed in every touch. The sureness of each bold move screamed of arrogant male, one who knew exactly what he did to her and the pleasure each caress gave her. He held her face pressed against his shoulder, murmuring softly to her as if understanding her insecurities even as his cock thrust deep.

Even the possibility that he could know her thoughts increased her sense of vulnerability.

She tightened her hold on him, brushing his shirt aside with her mouth and sinking her teeth into his shoulder. Whimpering, she held on to him as the pressure inside her built, her body tensing as he worked that special spot inside her with amazing accuracy.

Her clit throbbed painfully and she jolted each time his body came into contact with it. It began to burn, feeling swollen and far too sensitive, making each brush against it more intense than the last.

Jeremiah groaned, working the head of his cock with deliberate precision against the spot inside her, telling her that he knew more about her body than she did. “That’s it, darlin’. Come. Now, damn it. Come for me.” His hoarse demand in her ear sent a shiver through her at the same time his cock hit that spot again.

A scream ripped from her as the pleasure seemed to explode. She grabbed handfuls of his hair, holding on for dear life as her world spun all around her.

Without warning, Jeremiah tensed and rolled to his back, keeping her head tucked against his shoulder, his hand on her bottom tightening and taking her with him. He held her there, rocking her against him, forcing her clit into contact with his body.

Wild now, Maggie took over, bracing her hands on his shoulders to take what she needed, her movements slowing as the pleasure crested and began its slow decent. Dropping her head back onto his chest, she struggled to breathe, soothed by the solid beat of his heart beneath her ear. Neither moved as she struggled for air, her body trembling helplessly against his.

With a soft chuckle he slid his hands beneath her shirt to wrap them around her.

“I love when you wiggle around. I think maybe next time I’m going to put you on top and let you ride me.”

With a soft moan, she lifted her head, and despite feeling limp and weak, her pulse raced when she saw the look of tender affection in his eyes.

“Don’t make fun of me. You know I can’t be on top.”

He nipped at her bottom lip before tangling his hands in her hair and giving her one of those kisses so hot it curled her toes inside her boots.

“Of course you can. How else do you think Eb and I can take you at the same time?”

He looked over her shoulder, his smile widening. With his hands at her sides, holding her, he used his thumbs to play with her nipples. “One of us will be inside you just like I’m inside you now. That leaves that tight little hole wide open and free for the other one.”

The fleeting touch on her bottom hole made her jolt, her surprise giving way to alarm when Jeremiah applied pressure to her nipples again, and she realized that he couldn’t have touched her there.

She tried to break away and sit up, but a hand pressed at the middle of her back held her in place. “Jeremiah!” Maggie pushed against him when she felt it again. “Someone’s here!”

She wiggled around but Jeremiah caught her to him with a chuckle, not allowing her to look behind her.

He smiled, groaning when his cock slid from her. “I wonder who that could be.”

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